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Saturday, February 8, 2014

30 Minus 2 Days of Writing III: Hint, Hint

The perfect hint is subtle. A mere breath of a suggestion, planted in the subconscious mind without knowledge or invitation. A secret, hidden in the wind.

She’s been whispering hints at life. Getting close, so close. Her lips at its ear, her breath on its skin, unseen, unheard.

Please.

This post was written for Nicky and Mike's 30 Minus 2 Days of Writing III. To see the other posts, please visit We Work For Cheese. *
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24 comments:

  1. Paula Larew WootersFebruary 8, 2014 at 4:32 AM

    This is a great one, Ziva! I love "the mere breath of a suggestion."

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  2. MsDarkstarFebruary 8, 2014 at 4:37 AM

    I like this... subtle yet powerful.

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  3. Katherine MurrayFebruary 8, 2014 at 5:24 AM

    I need a cigarette. This was about life, right? ;) ha ha!

    Honestly, this is a MASTERPIECE... so so so beautiful!

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  4. ReformingGeekFebruary 8, 2014 at 5:50 AM

    Yes, please.

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  5. NickyFebruary 8, 2014 at 8:52 AM

    Oh Lemmikki. So beautiful.

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  6. KZFebruary 8, 2014 at 10:11 AM

    Lovely, Ziva. Beautiful word choice.

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  7. Laughing MomFebruary 8, 2014 at 4:40 PM

    beautiful! I am reading something into this post that probably isn't there...but I love the way you left it open to us readers.

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  8. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:06 PM

    Wearing less clothes might help, handsome.

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  9. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:06 PM

    Thanks, Boom Boom, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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  10. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:06 PM

    Thank you. :)

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  11. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:07 PM

    Hah! This is a no smoking zone, I'm afraid, but for you, I'll make an exception. ;)

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  12. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:08 PM

    :)

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  13. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:09 PM

    Thank you, gorgeous. xoxo

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  14. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:09 PM

    Thank you, KZ. :)

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  15. ZivaFebruary 8, 2014 at 7:12 PM

    Thank you so much, LM. There's certainly something there, but what, is for each of us to decide for ourselves..

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  16. nonamedufusFebruary 8, 2014 at 8:30 PM

    Um, ah, you talkin' to me?

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  17. ZivaFebruary 9, 2014 at 2:18 AM

    Of course, who else?

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  18. meleahrebeccahFebruary 11, 2014 at 10:55 PM

    absolutely fabulous!!

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  19. Linda R.February 12, 2014 at 9:33 PM

    Lovely! But "a mere breath of a suggestion" rarely gets any results around here. The flowers in your picture remind me of what we call rabbit tobacco.

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  20. ZivaFebruary 17, 2014 at 10:27 PM

    Yeah, sometimes what you really need is a baseball bat.

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  21. ZivaFebruary 17, 2014 at 10:27 PM

    Thank you, Meleah. :)

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  22. meleahrebeccahFebruary 18, 2014 at 6:43 PM

    xoxo

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  23. P.J.February 19, 2014 at 7:16 PM

    Hmmm...

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  24. ZivaFebruary 23, 2014 at 10:00 PM

    Are you onto something?

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