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Saturday, February 8, 2014

30 Minus 2 Days of Writing III: Hint, Hint

The perfect hint is subtle. A mere breath of a suggestion, planted in the subconscious mind without knowledge or invitation. A secret, hidden in the wind.

She’s been whispering hints at life. Getting close, so close. Her lips at its ear, her breath on its skin, unseen, unheard.

Please.


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24 comments:

  1. This is a great one, Ziva! I love "the mere breath of a suggestion."

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  2. I like this... subtle yet powerful.

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  3. I need a cigarette. This was about life, right? ;) ha ha!

    Honestly, this is a MASTERPIECE... so so so beautiful!

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  4. Lovely, Ziva. Beautiful word choice.

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  5. beautiful! I am reading something into this post that probably isn't there...but I love the way you left it open to us readers.

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  6. Wearing less clothes might help, handsome.

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  7. Thanks, Boom Boom, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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  8. Hah! This is a no smoking zone, I'm afraid, but for you, I'll make an exception. ;)

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  9. Thank you so much, LM. There's certainly something there, but what, is for each of us to decide for ourselves..

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  10. Lovely! But "a mere breath of a suggestion" rarely gets any results around here. The flowers in your picture remind me of what we call rabbit tobacco.

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  11. Yeah, sometimes what you really need is a baseball bat.

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